Thursday, September 27, 2007

A Metaphysical Connection

Her eyes shimmered in the soft light of the candle, adding to the intensity of the moment. Ive looked into those eyes a thousand times but this time, at that moment, they were not just a pair of eyes. The blue eyes I have often admired as being deep and wonderous had taken on another dimension and I fell into her eyes. I felt the heat emanating from her body and her soft smooth skin was crying out for my touch. I could see her in front of me, and I could feel our flesh connect but our connection was not only a physical one. I focused on the windows to her soul and how I had a desire to unite her essence with my own and create a bond that can transcend time and space. As I was falling into her eyes, I touched her soul, and she touched mine. For an instant that lasted an eternity we danced and shared our opposing energies with completely balanced and metaphysical harmony. Her yin was all up on my yang. Our passion grew and flooded our emotions until we were engulfed in wave after wave of intense physical, emotional and spiritual pleasure. The moment was fading and we both knew it, soon we would both be absorbed again in the mundane and the trivial. We stared back into eachothers eyes reestablishing our metaphysical connection and as I was slowly sinking back into my own head and away from our immaterial bond I saw her smile and I knew she was now a part of me.

1 comment:

Kata Strofik said...

Hmmm... Daniel-san. This is not badly written. But... it lacks poetry and even presence. By over commenting you take the description, the moment, whatever you'd like to call it, away from me (the reader). The piece becomes a scientific description in a way. I don't get the emotion that clearly you are telling us about.
I mean this- Its a metaphysical connection.. You don't need to say that. For example, you say 'The golden chariot is crossing the sky', or 'the sun is shining', but you don't say 'the golden chariot is crossing the sky. Its the sun. ..The sun is shining." Does that make any sense? If not I'd be happy to explain more. But who gives a nickle for my brain leakage..